Liked but think could be improved! Soz!!

I think its a good poem.. because when I go to the mall theres like a lot of weird people lol.. but there is room for improvement.. Mainly its just the flow of the poem other than that its cute ;) good job =)

--emotionless.19*

Ya i agree .. the mall is a funny place to go.. cute idea

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~!*Meaghen~!*

Excellent poem, made me laugh and definatly an original theme, i like the change of rhythm at the end it fininshes the poem well.

good luck in my contest!! xx