Beneath...

by .::BrokenHrt::.   Apr 2, 2006


Beneath the makeup
Beneath the lies
There is a girl who needs to die

Beneath the smiles
Beneath all thats fake
There is a girl who's life is at stake

Beneath the hidden tears
Beneath the many bloody cuts
There is a girl who's crying out for your help

Beneath the 'I'm ok's'
Beneath the 'theres just something in my eye'
There is a girl who wishes you could just see

Beneath the silence
Beneath all of that
There is a girl who's hanging on by a thread

She's hanging on for hope of a better life
She's hanging on by that thread
That thread is you but you left and now she's dead

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  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    Gr8 poem. the ending was a bit shocking. the poem is small but says alot. keep writing:)

  • 18 years ago

    by And smiles hide everything

    Great poem. read some of under diguise poems and it said to check ur poems out so i decided too. he was right your poems are great. keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by mookoo

    Very abrupt ending, kinda like a punk song, it does something completely unexpected, but perfect all the same. it had really good flow, maybe u did something with syllables or something, but it was quite good. much luv.

  • 18 years ago

    by albresha

    I love ur poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Brooke-Marie

    That was just beautiful you really captured me as a reader by it and how many people look at things! keep up the good work!

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