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by Briana Apr 2, 2006 category : Dark, fantasy / fantasy, mystical
He doesn't know The depths of his soul He's clueless of where to search He's fighting a past Full of difficult times But doubts his approach His scattered mind Can't think tonight So, he falls into a sleep Pleasant thoughts, happiness and things he never knew Come into full view How sweet it is to get away From the daily agony He must constantly face After a while His dreams don't help anymore Just remind him of his pain His problems seem endless So he decides to acquire old feelings and sleep for eternity
by glass*wall*prison
Nice write flow was off a bit nice rythm good write 4/5 ~GLASS~
by DistantKisses
I love your poem. It's beautiful ^_^