Wow.. intense poem..I really like the vocabulary and the choice of words you chose. Its a very vivid write.. My favourite part is:
For here you are hunting for a love
Although you search for a gentle soul

awesome job ;) 5/5 keep it up

Great job... 5/5 keep it up!

Very good, I haven't really seen many take that point of view before. It is pretty short but it is very good, maybe lengthen the second line by like two words.

Excellent Acrostic Poonam, Maginficent work!!!

Cleverly done..havent seen many poems done like this in a while. Some colourful language choices....I loved it few spelling mistakes like "nighttime" but its awesome...

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This is a wonderful descriptive poem! good work!!!