Seemed to have just random stuff thrown in ...good work can be improved

good write 4/5

Good job with this poem.. Interesting topic.. I dont normally read nature poem but I liked this one. Good Structure! Just work on your flow ;)other than that good job keep it up.. you have a lot of potential! =)

--emotionless.19*

Nicely done Poonam, well penned!!!

Simple but stunning could be tweeked in places but I liked it!!

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Wow! ur poems are so good. i need to start working on mine!