Wow that was awsome
i love the ending
it was put together so good
gaw you are such a good writer
wish we could talk more
hope your doing ok
Love you lots

It wasn't good it was pretty great and it you read some of my comments I can be a tough judge on poems. The structure was good, organized and rhyming did not seem forced. The idea of a paper heart was a different take on a broken heart so I loved that approach. haunting and sad but also beautiful as in the desire to find love. I think that's what it meant.

O this poem is just awesome! i hav nothing to say just that im lovin' it!
keep up the good work
luv ya

I LOVE YOUR POEM!!!!!
it is so good!!
i absoloutly love it!!
keep up the great work!!!

That was an awsome poem. I really liked it and the whole idea of it. Keep up the good work because you are really talented.

I dont really like these type of poems and this is no exception. but i do love these lines
"For the love of my life would never
Leave my paper heart to break"
and
"It was my mistake to draw that heart
A perfect picture of my own
But it was your mistake to break it
And turn my heart to stone."

they are amazing. it sounds so good and i love them

WOW great write...the ryming was great but the flow was a little off not enough to take away a perfect score though

5/5

~GLASS~

WOW ... i LOVED it excellent write .. it was amazing.. I know exactlly how this feels since this is what ive been trying to say all along.. 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

In al holy wowness!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! miss sierra kisck ass!!!!!!!!!!!!! thats just amazing....beautiful in every way. its so sad....but amazing. i love you more then life itself!!!!!!!!"a childs life is like a piece of paper on which every person leaves a mark" and you sierra have left a very big one on mine....luv ya babe...hang in there keep writing!!!!!
~chelsea~

I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Love it!
Tip: You should try using "Here's a heart you cannot break" insted of "can't", I think it flows better :)
Great work, keep up the amazing writing .::heart::.

WOW, sierra, this is stunning. Im speechless! really, wow, jesus! Incredible incredible writing.
really really good i love it, so sad =(
Its really original, i love it huni =)
but i love u more

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Wow girlie!!!! this is some powerful crap!! i worry about you!!! god damn... i look around myself, here and on aim and all i see are girls that are depressed and suicidal or whatever... ITS HORRIBLE!!! makes me want to cry.. life is so unfair to the best ppl.. wish that i could fix something for you!!
lots of love
amanda and baby

......Haunting, literally stole my breath away. don't let people critique you on your "organization"! This poem was absolutely flawless, and I believe you know that. You deserve a 5/5 from every person that reads this! Excellent, excellent job. ~luv always, KT

This is a great poem
im so speechless
the ending was unexpected
but in a good way
you seem to have so many emotions flowing in you at one time
its wonderful
keep up the good wokd
xxxx

Im speechless.

Wow...I dont know what to say..Your poem was so emotional, I could feel the pain as I was reading. I loved the ending..it was all amazing though..Good work 5/5
-Shannon

Hey i really like ur poem it had a really good ending and was very emotional i almost cried! Keep up the good work

love steph xoxox

Wow...I'm just astonished. ...the emotion you used just so heartbreaking to anyone who reads it. outstanding job 5/5

This is the most creative poem i ever saw keep up the good work.