What have I done?

by Mark   Apr 2, 2006


I feel no one cares, like I'm all alone..
It hurts me so bad, I cut to the bone.
I keep pushing my friends away,
While I'm here.. I think, and lay.

You have no idea what I've given up,
To make everyone happy, I've tried too hard.
It's making me feel so bad inside, all the guilt, the anger, the sadness..

I try to forget the past, I try to let it go,
But what the future hold, things just won't flow.
I want to change for the best and everyone,
Heck, I'll change for anyone.

I don't like the way I am, I really don't
You may think I'm nice, but wait until you really meet me.
I don't have as good friends in real than I do on here,
I just want to be happy, it's just all too hard.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This is sad *tear*

    But like I said in another poem, You gotta digg deeper! Tell me what you've given up. How it feels to be all alone, Why do you push your friends away. Just a bit of a tip, It helps the reader understand it alot better :P

  • 18 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    Exactly how i feel.

    but Mark, you don't have to change for me. or for anyone. you're great just the way you are, and i love you.

    good poem, keep it up. =)

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    Dude this was a really well written poem! You have captivated sometimes what I feel!! Well great job
    I really loved it keep it up!! And thanx for you advise!! And when you need anyone to talk to just look me up!!

  • 18 years ago

    by jess

    Omg i love this poem.
    you know if you ever need to talk to me you have my msn address or just send me an e-mail.
    keep your chin up hun!!
    5/5 love jess XxXxXxXx

  • 18 years ago

    by Marissa

    I love your poem!!
    it is so good!!
    and it seems kinda like you have basicly explained something that i have been going thought aswell!!
    if you ever wanna talk about it then just give me a shout!!
    and i hope you don't mind if i put your ;poem on my space because i love it so much!!
    cya

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