Reflection.

by anonymous   Apr 2, 2006


I hear a softened voice,
a quiet help me in the night,
i try to pretend its nothing
and the child will be alright

I'm lying alone in my bed
when i hear a softened cry
without seeing who it is
i know she wants to die

it goes on for so long
till i have no strength to hide
and i turn and face the girl
and know her pain has not lied

her eyes red from crying
and no soul lives inside
shes wearing bracelets on her wrist
but her cuts she cannot hide

i look straight into her eyes
into the sadness that they cast
i stare at myself in the mirror
clench my fist and punch the glass

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  • 17 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    I luv it, it was well expressed and sorta reflects me
    it was emotional and well structured
    great job

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xXxBrOkEnAnGeLxXx

    Hey 5/5 again... geez i might as well just say 5/5 for all your poems! your realli talented and you should definitly keep writing...

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow always a suprise...reminds me of myself. gr8 work again...there is no need 2 say u suck now, because u dun so wow 5/5
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    It started out good, i just think the ending could have been better, specifically the last two lines. good work none the less.

  • 18 years ago

    by Esther

    I liked it but i found it a bit sad,like it nearly made me cry???? But i thought it was great!!

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