by out of death Apr 2, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I shut the door |
by Huitzi
Wow. this poem is amazing. so much sensory detail in it it feels like im there. i think its great. my brother totally can relate to this. i better show him it. |
This is a great poem. i can really relate to it. i think you are a great writer. and i mean it this poem is one of the best i have read. nothing in it is out of place and it is just as it should be i think. keep your work up. i like what i have saw. |
by *heidi;
I really like!it is awesome.except some of the phrases,maybe this is just to me,but some of them should have a little rewording. but kiu(keep it up)cuz you are still totally gr8 and writing |
by MiaAlex
I love it do not change a thing |
THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST I'VE READ, DONT CHANGE A THING!!!! |