THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST I'VE READ, DONT CHANGE A THING!!!!
I REALLY CAN RELATE TO THIS!
CHECK OUT MYT POEMS, IF U CAN....PLZ LOOK AT 'LET HER BLEED' THANK U
TC AND KEEP IT UP!!
XOXO

I love it do not change a thing

I really like!it is awesome.except some of the phrases,maybe this is just to me,but some of them should have a little rewording. but kiu(keep it up)cuz you are still totally gr8 and writing

This is a great poem. i can really relate to it. i think you are a great writer. and i mean it this poem is one of the best i have read. nothing in it is out of place and it is just as it should be i think. keep your work up. i like what i have saw.
-C.P.-
p.s. you dont need to take anything out. its perfect to me.

Wow. this poem is amazing. so much sensory detail in it it feels like im there. i think its great. my brother totally can relate to this. i better show him it.