Comments : Gone And Left Standing

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Effective ending, and the start sets the scene of the poem well. Two mistakes,

    I do't want anyone,

    Should be

    I don't want anyone,

    And

    I fell I'm on trial.

    Should be

    I feel I'm on trial.

    Hope this helps, its a shame to see good poetry wasted with petty mistakes :)

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Nice poem, keep it up
    xxxx