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by Sole
Effective ending, and the start sets the scene of the poem well. Two mistakes, I do't want anyone, Should be I don't want anyone, And I fell I'm on trial. Should be I feel I'm on trial. Hope this helps, its a shame to see good poetry wasted with petty mistakes :) Peace. [Sole]
by Tara Kay
Nice poem, keep it up xxxx