X Falling

by Sole   Apr 2, 2006


Falling
When I tried so hard to fly

Drowning
In every tear that I cry

Wasting
Every time I tell a lie

Breaking
With each day that passes by

Changing
As my feelings take to blue

Turning
With the things I'm going through

Hating
Knowing everything is true

Hiding
When I know I can't face you

Failing
Where I know I must be strong

Hurting
With each depressing love song

Shaking
I don't know where I belong

Loving
In the eyes of some I'm wrong

Stalling
When you're standing here by me

Paining
I don't know where I should be

Losing
Knowing I am never free

Dying
All because I made you see

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  • 16 years ago

    by LiveMyLifeOnALullaby

    WOW. very nicely done.
    you described each situation with a strong verb and it really set the mood of the poem.

    "Hiding
    When I know I can't face you"

    Favourite line ^_^
    it reminds me so much about how I felt when I was rejected by a close friend and I sort of just hid from him because I couldn't face the fact that he'd never like me more than a friend.

    absolutely loved the poem!
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by xox kate xox

    I really liked this poem. I liked how deep it was without being over emotional and 'flowery'. . . keep it up.

    Kate x

  • 18 years ago

    by sandy

    AWE! i love this poem its deep. keep it upp. thanks for the comment.
    -sandy-

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This poem was amazing! i loved the way youve written it. great job! 5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by Brigitte

    So original and unique! I can tell that you probably first wrote down the words that described how you felt and then went into detail with everything! I loved how you changed rhyming every couple stanzas.

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