This is defo one of your best, very sad, hmm poor me can't think of any thing contructive to say
Its a very different formot, i must admit, yet...it works to yor advantage by expressing all your different emotions/feelings
I had to try so hard to write something boring, so there you go

Really loved it..:D

Great poem sole.
its absolutely awesome, keep it up
xxxxx

Wow...this is genius.
Your making me cry again Sole. I love the way you have done this, drawing out each word and adding a thought to truly expand it. I feel for you....

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Very good, unique. I liked the thought and then your adding a line under it explaining it, I dunno I probably sound stupid right now but oh well.

So original and unique! I can tell that you probably first wrote down the words that described how you felt and then went into detail with everything! I loved how you changed rhyming every couple stanzas.

This poem was amazing! i loved the way youve written it. great job! 5/5*

AWE! i love this poem its deep. keep it upp. thanks for the comment.
-sandy-

I really liked this poem. I liked how deep it was without being over emotional and 'flowery'. . . keep it up.

Kate x

WOW. very nicely done.
you described each situation with a strong verb and it really set the mood of the poem.

"Hiding
When I know I can't face you"

Favourite line ^_^
it reminds me so much about how I felt when I was rejected by a close friend and I sort of just hid from him because I couldn't face the fact that he'd never like me more than a friend.

absolutely loved the poem!
xoxo