Again lovely job! u r so talented dear! wat else i can say to praise ur work?
always......5/5

much luv,
Bharti

Haha I agree with Bharti. Lovely work dear.:)

OH.. wow.......... it was just beautifully written... too good.. though it's sad, I still love it.... great work.. keep writing... 5/5 for sure...

Much Love,
Ipsita

......wondering what words could justify my appreciation for this poem....
i seriously have no words.

loved the entire poem but was speechless after the last line-

"hope someday my love for you would make sense"

purva

This poem was totally top of the world. As I was reading it, I just lived through your poem. I know that you have definitely been through the dark sides of life from which you can write such extreme poems like this, but then again, who hasnt? But only you can bring out those darknesses of life so brightly in to a poem.

Outstanding job once again. I hope and I pray that your darkness doesnt last long. I absolutely loved your last stanza. There couldnt have been any better ending for this poem.

Love
Michelle

Amazing poem very well i love it....5/5

sonam

This poem is amazing, I love the way it flows, and the wording used. def another 5 vote from me, keep writing and ill be sure to keep reading take care sarah x

Wow i loved this poem
everything was so powerful
you did an amazing job

Wow,... I love the story it tells, and the feeling it puts across... those you love are lucky

Well written. The words were good. Of course there seemed a slight problem with the poem that can be overlooked because the rest seems to be amazing. Well done. An astounding piece.
~S3I -Faith

Wow! Very deep but i still love it a lot...like i said before you are a really good poet....

Nice

Nitin
It tears my heart to see the way your heart was crying. excellent job on your poem. The imagery and word choices are outstanding.

so many years have passed me by like this
sometimes i stay alive, sometimes i miss
killing my own reflection to be someone else
hope someday my love for you would make sense

Thes lines are gut wrenching. How sad :(
Thinking of you with a smile on your face.
Love Cindy