The Story Of His Best Friends Life

by kels   Apr 2, 2006


With slits so deep yet so contagious ,
His best friends now a cutting ragist.
With such a sad look upon her face,
How could this once born beauty turn to such a disgrace
Her limbs now marked with the worst of lifes journeys,
Every time she looks back, she repeats those tragic memories.
These past few months ,her tears have fallen worst than ever before,
The scars reminding her & again she thinks more and more
She glances across the room & walks to the knife ,
Then again she takes another strike.
This time she strikes to far, to deep,
& all she can do is wait & slowly die in her sleep.
The next morning her best friend gets the call ,
This is when his whole life would tumble & fall .
He cant help but think theres something he could of done,
But the reality is ,this young girl was too far gone.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Roo

    The last line was very powerful
    the whole thing = beautiful

  • 18 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    I liked some of this and some of it I didn't. The first line was good and then the 2nd line came and i had to look up the "word" ragist and it didn't show up. when it gets up to the point where she takes another slash on the wrist and from then on i believe is good. now that i look more at your poem and read some of the lines over some of them are really good. ah oh well blah...i'll give you a 3. (sorry) and thanks a lot for commenting april first was the worst. i was stunned when i saw that i got four comments on it. welp now the next person that commented...c ya..

  • 18 years ago

    by kels

    Hi everyone,
    I wrote this poem pretty much about me ,at a stage when i felt realli depressed.please comment luv u all xox

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