Hi everyone,
I wrote this poem pretty much about me ,at a stage when i felt realli depressed.please comment luv u all xox

I liked some of this and some of it I didn't. The first line was good and then the 2nd line came and i had to look up the "word" ragist and it didn't show up. when it gets up to the point where she takes another slash on the wrist and from then on i believe is good. now that i look more at your poem and read some of the lines over some of them are really good. ah oh well blah...i'll give you a 3. (sorry) and thanks a lot for commenting april first was the worst. i was stunned when i saw that i got four comments on it. welp now the next person that commented...c ya..

The last line was very powerful
the whole thing = beautiful