Awww quite sad but i really like it! keep it up it rhymes really well!! xx

OMG!!! I cant believe the way you write ur poems!!! it's like i could relate even if i didn't want to I feel what your saying...I am goign through the same thing...
Keep it up!!
I loved it.

Love is a strang and special thing so the song says.
This is an older man here and I have met Love in all its wonder, I have been heart-broken and climbed its heavenly steps and one day you will look back and have done the same wondering what all the fuss was about. In one of my quotes Lost Love I say,
"No love is ever wasted it fulfills that time when shared with the one you loved and it should be cherished for the good it did at that time". One day you will find a balance an look back as I do.
Another great poem 5/5 don't really like Gona though go Irish perhaps going to.

Ya if your as young as 16, than I would definetly say give Gavin as shot. Great poem by the way.