Sickening Torture

by Angie   Apr 2, 2006


Yelling,
Screaming,
I remember it all.
Punches,
Kicks,
I felt them all.
The pain,
The tears,
That were shed from my eyes.
You laughed,
And smiled,
Happy that I cried.

© Angie K

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  • 17 years ago

    by amelia

    Short & sweet
    amazing poetry
    keep it up
    love
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Very emotional, very deep and heartfelt, really sad and excellently written.

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Angie --
    Now, THiS, is a poem of great rhyme. I could tell where all the rhymes were coming, and the flow was good as well. I liked how it was just one long stanza, it added a nice twist. Most people really don`t do that. This poem was short, so, not much to comment on. But it was great. I`m happy I got to look into your work! 5/5

    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very short, but great write! Very understandable.

  • 18 years ago

    by XxCount bodies like sheep to the rhythm of a war drumxX

    It's short but it gives me a picture...like I can just feel what you're saying..no..I can hear it.

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