Wow.. I really enjoyed this poem.. Its short but sweet well its sad but you know what i mean ;) its short but its still really well written. Great flow and I liked how you put in"I felt them all." etc afterwards.. great ending! awesome write ;)

--emotionless.19*

Wow...that's deep...but good...actually...great!

That was Awesome!!
like short but you got everything out!! Good job!!

Rach

Really short
really awesome
good flow and rythm

nice write

~GLASS~

Wow Very Deep And Short And So Emotional I Love It!
5/5
Steph*Xbr0k3ndr3amzzx*

Wow, I love it. It's short... but its to the point. It kind of reminds me of some of the things that I've gone through. It flows together perfectly. 5/5

~ Tina

Short and sweet with lots of goodness packed in! the flow is very well done. xx

Really powerful peice, short but very strong. the feelings are vrey pronounced in this and the words well chosen and smoothly run into one another. super peice of writting

5/5

Its nice a short and really emphasizes the hurt. nice

Short and sweet.
Brash and cutting.
Real and raw.
This poem did it all....

[lostlaureate - come find me]

WOW that was really good short but great 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen!~*

Wow, For such a short piece, It was brillant. Filled with alot of emotion. A really good job! Keep it up! 5/5

`taleee xx

Wow i like it short but powerful you are a wonderful poet

It's short but it gives me a picture...like I can just feel what you're saying..no..I can hear it.

Very short, but great write! Very understandable.

Angie --
Now, THiS, is a poem of great rhyme. I could tell where all the rhymes were coming, and the flow was good as well. I liked how it was just one long stanza, it added a nice twist. Most people really don`t do that. This poem was short, so, not much to comment on. But it was great. I`m happy I got to look into your work! 5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Very emotional, very deep and heartfelt, really sad and excellently written.

Short & sweet
amazing poetry
keep it up
love
amy