Thanks for the comment on april first was the worst. i just thought of the first line yesterday and thought what the hell i should just make something usfull out of it and hope for the best. fortunetly i was stunned with four comments today. well thanks again. anyways good poem. it's different. i love death poems so yeah. :p i gave it a four. that's because i prefer longer ones. that one you read...phff..no not long. that's very short considering the rest of my work is usualy very long. well i'll give ya a four. c ya.