Forgotten Words

by 111308   Apr 2, 2006


Look at the lonely girl curled up in the corner,
Look into her eyes and tell me what you see,
She's lost all hope,
As you can tell,
She doesn\'t want to live in this world anymore,
She's been hurt by so many people,
And shes bounced back so many times,
But she's lost so much,
And can't bounce back this time,
She can't stand the pain anymore,
She has too much pain bottled up inside,
She walks away from the corner,
And stands by her bed,
She crouches down so she can look underneath,
She sees a box and reaches for it,
She opens the box,
And there she sees the blade,
She grabs it and closes the box shut,
She then puts the box back,
And sits on top of her bed,
She then takes the blade,
And scrapes it across her wrist,
She makes small but deep slits,
Her skin begins to seperate,
and out pours the enraging crimson blood,
She lets out a silent weep,
The pain it hurt,
She hadn\'t done it for so long her body wasn\'t use to it anymore,
She grabs for a towel,
And gently puts it around her wrist,
To make sure it doesn\'t get anywhere,
She finally felt a little releaved,
Then feeling a little dizzy,
She layed on her bed,
She looked down to see it was seeping through the towel,
She could feel her body going weaker,
Starting to get numb,
She put a slight smile on her face,
Because she knew she was drifting away,
Away from the place she hated the most,
And all people would be able to find left of her would be her ghost,
But then she had remembered what her mother said that morning,
I love you and I never wish you dead,
But it was too late,
Because a few seconds past,
She layed cold and still,
Because she was dead.....

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  • 18 years ago

    by sweetiepie18

    Fantastic job! you're astounding.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow, I could really picture this in my head. The way you described it was really good. You did an exellent job on this on! Keep it up, && Smile =] 5/5

    `natalie x-x

  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    Very sad! I like it, it is a great story and nicely written. To make the flow better you could try to lay poems out in stanzas with a similar amount of syllables in each line. Great work and take care
    - Polly x

  • 18 years ago

    by Micaela

    Its great.
    I love it.
    It makes a lot of sense.