I'm Sorry...

Wow - A poem that truly comes from the heart is always one of the best sorts. The only not-so-good point about your poem, is the fourth stanza. It ruins the flow a little because of slightly longer lines - I tend to make the same mistake! Also, your rhyming scheme was a little off at points. Other than that, your poem was excellent, and I really enjoyed reading through it!

Peace. [Sole]

Awe. my Sandy baby. I dont know about what the others think, but I say dont worry to much about it. I love you very muchly(L)(K)

First I wanted to say that your poem is great, just like all the others, and second i want to say that it's okay... you did hurt me a lot, and you hurt everyone else too, but throughout it all, i'm not going anywhere, and I hope that you don't either, because I love you sandy pooh... and don't you ever forget that... also, life is going to eventually get better, whether you bleieve me or not... and eventually, your life is going to make sence... the pieces of your broken home and broken life are going to slowly be put back together, and someday, you'll realize, that life isn't so hard... i love you tons sandy! and i'm sorry too...

heidi

I liked ur poem, i can relate...