I know I've found my better half

by Tripp   Apr 2, 2006


I think I've found my other half
A girl who will never laugh

at me, a girl who will always help pull me up
who will always be there for me, when my life is screwed up

After 10 months we have an unbreakable bond
one thats made each of us so fond

Of one another
I'm so glad we have been able to become lovers
The one thing that keeps me standing,
Is we both share love for one another

I don't need a dare
to try to see her
she is my food, drink, and air

Without her I would surely falter
but at the rate we're going, I'll be seeing her at the alter

I love this girl more and more every day
and i hope that soon I may

be able to muster the intelligence to share my true feelings
tell her the emotional dealings

I am happily given
Whatever she does, she'll always be forgiven

She would do the same for me,
this I plainly see

I no longer only think I've found my other half
I know I've found my better half

All of you are probably thinking that I'm too young to harbour these sorts of feelings...well if you\'re thinking that, you're wrong. I would take a bullet for this girl in an instant. I love her more than she can EVER believe

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    I kno u can be in love @ this age b/c i just found love a while ago...until he left me....but at least i kno truu love exists and its not "simply lust" like my poem says...i hope to find love like yours one day...terrific poem and it eneded with a bam...good job again...
    thx for ur comments and ive been watching my grammer now lol....
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Great job.. And i liked the part at the end where you talk about taking the bullet for Becky.. i think its so cute .. keep up the good work...

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I LOVED THIS SO MUCH, i had to read it again lol..ok so like let me kno if i have not read any...i think i have read them all so keep me posted nad i will be checkn often for ur new stuff..keep readn mine thxsssssss YOU DO NOT KNOW HOW MUCH THIS MEANS TO ME..i mean i want to be a prof. writer so i need all the crtiique i can get...THANXS

    lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Actually i think u can find love at any age..I KNOW as well that I have found MY BETTER HALF. So i def. believe yaz n wish u the best of luck. please read more of my poems if u get a chance..and i will return the favor...thnxs

    lissa

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