Actually i think u can find love at any age..I KNOW as well that I have found MY BETTER HALF. So i def. believe yaz n wish u the best of luck. please read more of my poems if u get a chance..and i will return the favor...thnxs |
I LOVED THIS SO MUCH, i had to read it again lol..ok so like let me kno if i have not read any...i think i have read them all so keep me posted nad i will be checkn often for ur new stuff..keep readn mine thxsssssss YOU DO NOT KNOW HOW MUCH THIS MEANS TO ME..i mean i want to be a prof. writer so i need all the crtiique i can get...THANXS |
by Fallen~Tears
Great job.. And i liked the part at the end where you talk about taking the bullet for Becky.. i think its so cute .. keep up the good work... |
I kno u can be in love @ this age b/c i just found love a while ago...until he left me....but at least i kno truu love exists and its not "simply lust" like my poem says...i hope to find love like yours one day...terrific poem and it eneded with a bam...good job again... |