Comments : I know I've found my better half

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Actually i think u can find love at any age..I KNOW as well that I have found MY BETTER HALF. So i def. believe yaz n wish u the best of luck. please read more of my poems if u get a chance..and i will return the favor...thnxs

    lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I LOVED THIS SO MUCH, i had to read it again lol..ok so like let me kno if i have not read any...i think i have read them all so keep me posted nad i will be checkn often for ur new stuff..keep readn mine thxsssssss YOU DO NOT KNOW HOW MUCH THIS MEANS TO ME..i mean i want to be a prof. writer so i need all the crtiique i can get...THANXS

    lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Great job.. And i liked the part at the end where you talk about taking the bullet for Becky.. i think its so cute .. keep up the good work...

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    I kno u can be in love @ this age b/c i just found love a while ago...until he left me....but at least i kno truu love exists and its not "simply lust" like my poem says...i hope to find love like yours one day...terrific poem and it eneded with a bam...good job again...
    thx for ur comments and ive been watching my grammer now lol....
    love ya lots,
    sore