Angie. One question? Whose Brian! I think I'm the first person to hear about this Brian fellow. Lmao. Ohh! Rhymage. Wtf?! Rhymage? That's retarted! Anyways, what I think of the poem... I think that its alright. I think for a book one day, this could be published. This whole page could be published on one book. Your poems deserve higher than 5 angie! Keep up the creativity! Anyways, me and shane? Marriage? I don't think we are. Because we meet new people in our lives and this thing may not last. Unless its gonna be long distance and stuff. I was thinking of my parents when I wrote that one. :] and my cousin, Len gave me idee[ers] like cherish and perish. Haha. And that drug thing, watched tv about how they make cocaine. Lmao!!!