by CoLliN Apr 3, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Missing You (con’t) |
The last line seemed odd...but i loved this..i love alliteration and comparisons..it brightens up the poem..wow great jobb..5/5! |
Wow lol for a dufus brother u can write! LMAO! well kepp it dufus love yas |
by nadsyy
Aww...nice work...i loved it...keep it up..love dia mwaz xoxo |
by Laura
Wow! great job...keep it up...XOx Laura Marie |
Wow! it was realy good! And ur incredibly sweet. Im missing you too. |