Comments : Should I Cry

  • 18 years ago

    by Ric Hansen

    I met a girl; she was "seperated" from her husband. We became friends; we got close, TOO close! I was deep in love, he found out. He wouldn't divorce; he threatened my life; we had to end it...it was the hardest thing I ever went through. My lesson: "seperated means still married'''. Stay Away!

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    I love this poem! I love how you repeat "dark of winter, light of spring". It so dam powerful!

    I love you writingstyle. Very wonderful. Great flow!

    Very well done! That's all I can say =)

    Lotsaaaaaaa love
    -xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Ric Hansen

    I appreciate that coming from you; your awesome. Mahalo!

  • 18 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Nice poem and very well written so keep it up nice job.......NJ

  • 18 years ago

    by Ric Hansen

    Thank you all; I have looked at all your poetry and you all inspire me with your diverse and unique styles! I appreciate all of you! Mahalo!

    Ric