I simply loved it!

i like the style in which you have written

very nice

purva

Omg if this is reall and it relle happened to u i know exactly how u feel i went through that just a few weeks ago and i still am but omg its so hard but look dont worry im here for u if u need to talk but by the way great poem!

Omg if this is reall and it relle happened to u i know exactly how u feel i went through that just a few weeks ago and i still am but omg its so hard but look dont worry im here for u if u need to talk but by the way great poem!

Thanks guys, do you think you could read/comment on my other poem, Melted Paper, Broken Glass? I think it is a lot better than this one but I want to know what you guys think.
Thanks,
Allison

Wow this is a great poem it's better than i could ever do. Keep up the good work.