by killme_while i sleep Apr 3, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
As i walk to the end |
by dee
That was pretty deep, i liked it. i liked the way you made it ryhme and that it made em think of a situation in my own life. good stufff those ones are the best.. |
I like the way you wrote it! And the way you made it rhyme! Cool poem keep it up! It held alot of emotions and that one of the things i liked! ^_^ |