Omg wow i luv it sooooooooooooo much u did such an awsome job it gave me tingles
i cant say how much i luved it!!!!!lol
well done keep on writing
xoxox 5/5

Oh my god man what a cool poem i loved it so much....and i loved the ending it was great u are so talantd keep up the gud wrk

GOOD JOB.. i already said that i loved it on msn:):) but I STILL LOVE IT!!! keep writing.. ur more talented than me :s

I dont know who i dont konow why but this poem describes me oh to well... u have lots of talent just to let u know

♥ BleedinHEarT911

Another great poem. left me speechless. just awesome. keep writing.

Good job yet again

I can relate to this on so asspects. And I really loved it, and it wasn't to long you have a really great talent great work.

Aww wow this is really good but its sad. i defiantly like this a lot and i can kind of relate to it in some ways. excellent work. 5/5

Wow. I like how you used to first stanza and altered it a little bit to make the last stanza. Very well written!! Good job!! Lots of emotion was tied into this poem! :) I loved it! 5/5

~BJ~

Another excellent poem!! The emotion was so clear and life like!! It really grabs your attention,
great job,
-AnnMarie

Wow.. I don't know what to say. I liked it. It was really sad and on some parts I can realllly relate. Great Job Yet again.

GREAT POEM 5/5

This is another nice poem! i enjoyed reading it!

Another favourite of mine. 5/5

I'm speechless, in awe and totally shocked at how perfect this poem is! I am seriously speechless... my mouth has dropped and WOW! Only one small thing: in the very last line I would have written: It looks as if I couldn't win...

xxEvilAngelxx

Awhh, sweetie that was brilliant! The descriptions created great imagery. The flow worked really well and the emotion was clear. I liked it, nice job 5/5

Aw it's really sad.

Very good writing. =]

I loved this poem it was written so beautifully and it had great flow u are a talented writer