Edited Girl

by Vanessa Lea   Apr 3, 2006


Sort my files
Empty my recycle bin
Winzip my memories
Delete the folders I put them in

Program my life
Change my display
Open controls and settings
Make me operate your way

Hack into my mainframe
Set program access and defaults
Find my hidden files
Unlock my secret vaults

Schedule my tasks
Restore my system information
Defragment my hard drive
I may shut down, but be patient

Make me whatever you want
I'm just an edited girl
Open up my control panel
Fit me into this edited world

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    This is both funny and poignant......a sad comedy routine....well-written............

  • 17 years ago

    by locky

    I don't no that much about computers but i understood that poem and it was great 5/5 very good

  • 18 years ago

    by Brooke Amity

    I think this poem is brilliant twisted wording.
    I am in awe of your talent.
    ..xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    Woah!!! Thats excellent! The topic is so different and the computer talk is clever. A really great write. The flow was excllent the whole way through and the ending was strong. Keep up the great work. I'll read more.. you're very talented. =] 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Wow... I really loved this...It really explains the world today...Wow, amazing job is all I have to say. Excellent.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

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