If you died today

by bigwarmhugs   Apr 3, 2006


If I died today
drew my last breath
would you cry for me
remember my last wishes

if I died today
my broken heart stopped
would your world fall down
and your future seem uncertain

If I died today
and you were near me
would you draw comfort
knowing you saw me last

If I died today
and I left you something
would you carry it forever
or dump it in some cupboard

I need to know
where our love stands
if this is one sided
this devotion of mine

cause if you died today
my heart would break
they'd have to pry me off
the grave where u lay

If you died today
and left me something
i'd take it with me everywhere
as if it were u inside

If you died today
i've have to rewrite my dreams
cause facing life without you
is to give them all away

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  • 18 years ago

    by Always4You

    Wow! That was great. I agree with Medical Disaster...you should write more. Im going to read and comment on your other poem now. Keep it up! :D

  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    Hey thanx for the coment, i explained everything bout everything on the site its erm titled help i have no one else to turn to and well things complecated and im so sad and need to get my confidence and trust back again i suppoe. anyway i loved ur poem how come u dont have more if u've changed ur account ewhy not move the epoms? just curious.
    sad lonely girl with no sad lonely name

  • 18 years ago

    by Medial_Disaster

    13 votes and NO comments. I already voted it a 5/5! I think you should post more poems. You must have been doing this a LONG time b/c my first poems posted SUCK! Either that, or you're just VERY, VERY talented. Either way, you're on my faves list. DON'T LET ME DOWN! Keep writing! :D
    PV

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