Out of my reach

by Robyn   Apr 3, 2006


It hurts when u say you love me and just walk away
it seems like walking is all that you u are good at
you have never been there for me
you are always been at a far
just out of my touch
out of my reach
out of my mind
out of my heart

** this is really bad just out of me head**

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  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    "walking is all that you all u are good at"

    should be something like
    'walking is all that you are good at'
    and the ending was good, except you shouldn't use the word 'just' all the time. Use it for the first one, then leave it out for the other lines.

    This isn't a bad poem at all. Just needs a few touch ups. But keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Cody

    This wasn't bad but it's defiently not your best I would love for you to write longer poems I think they would be great, just one or two more verses

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