Sing To Me

by Cuddles   Apr 3, 2006


Sing to me of heartache,
of sorrow,
of pain
Sing the song of bluebirds,
of sunshine,
of rain

Sing a song of smiles,
of laughter,
of tears
Sing a song of abuse,
of terror,
of fears

Sing to me of wisdom,
of memories best forgotten
Sing of unrequited love,
of paths left untrodden

Sing to me of happy times,
of never ending strife
Let experience guide your words,
and sing me the song of life

written 3-25-06

(c) Mary Barren

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    This is a lovely piece, I really enjoyed the sing-songness of it and how everything seemed to flow naturally after each other. I enjoyed the format and liked how you altered the structure halfway through without losing any of the rhythm. Also the language you have used is simple and realistic and very effective. I liked the ending aswell it brings everything you've said together and closes the poem very nicely. Excellent piece :) :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Such a wonderful write. Just Perfect! Keep on going, you rock!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    I think that one can choose the sing he likes in this poem. a delightful one.

    all the best,
    wishes

  • 18 years ago

    by Kim

    So beautiful! The rhythm, the flow, simple wonderful ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful Mary, I love how you did this and the rhythm is wonderful, enjoyed, superb penn!!!

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