This is simply beautiful! I love it, so exquisitely written. Awesome structure to this poem! Great job :)

WOW!! LOVED THIS MARY! oh my goodness I loved how you ended and loved how you began! Inspired me to try that style!! I loved this!!!
Chels

Wonderful Mary, I love how you did this and the rhythm is wonderful, enjoyed, superb penn!!!

So beautiful! The rhythm, the flow, simple wonderful ^_^

I think that one can choose the sing he likes in this poem. a delightful one.

all the best,
wishes

Such a wonderful write. Just Perfect! Keep on going, you rock!!!

This is a lovely piece, I really enjoyed the sing-songness of it and how everything seemed to flow naturally after each other. I enjoyed the format and liked how you altered the structure halfway through without losing any of the rhythm. Also the language you have used is simple and realistic and very effective. I liked the ending aswell it brings everything you've said together and closes the poem very nicely. Excellent piece :) :)