I write this as i die

by SaveMe?   Apr 3, 2006


I donâ??t want to go on living
I just want my life to end
Nothing has been right
And it will never be again

Why couldnâ??t they understand
This life just wasnâ??t for me
No matter how hard they tried
They would never truly see

The pain that made me suffer
Throughout everyday and night
Even though I smiled
I would never be alright

The sun never shines
But the darkness always stay
I will live a lonely life
In till that special day

The day I will finally leave
Leaven and never return
Surly no one will miss me
No one will be concerned

There is no other way to escape
All this pain and sorrow
And now thankfully for me
There will be no tomorrow

I will finally be in peace
When I finally leave this place
Going on like this is killing me
And now from life I can be erased
My existence was useless
And I donâ??t know why I am still here
But I know if I go on any longer
I will only shed more tears

I wish to not cry any longer
So this is my last good bye
This is my final message
I write this as I die

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lucy Lewin

    5/5
    you're an amazing poet.

  • 18 years ago

    by Koreena

    You are a great writer, thank you for ur comment on mine, u really showed ur emotions, i think all of us can relate to it at one time or another.
    5/5-koreena

  • 18 years ago

    by prettytwiggy2

    This peom is really good i think thats it good because i can relate to wut ur saying...thanx for the comment im new to this and i need all the encourage i can get-natalie

  • 18 years ago

    by Renee Kotva

    Each poem I read of yours just gets better, this was written very well, I like all the details too. I hope everything is all right just rember to pray!

    very well written def a 5/5

    god bless
    Renee

  • 18 years ago

    by MadelineJayde

    Aww that is such a deep and t0uching p0em! its s0 sad but i l0ve it! u hav such a great talent with writing and all 0f ur p0ems are great. thanks f0r the c0mment 0n my p0em, it means al0t
    l0ve maddy x0ox

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