Fly away

by Meggie33   Apr 3, 2006


Fly away with my heart, fly away with my heart,
fly away with my soul, and tear it apart,

fly away with my heart, fly away with my world,
fly back into my life, and claim im your girl.

fly out the door, and slam it as you go,
fly back through and say your love should show.

fly around the town, have all the fun you please,
fly back to me, and continue being a tease.

fly from sea to sea,
then fly back to me.

fly to the stars, and capture for me the best,
fly from girl to girl, but claim in better than the rest.

fly from night till day,
then fly back away.

fly through my life, like you don't even care,
but then fly back and love me, like you want me there.

**COMMENTS GREATLY APPRECIATED**

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mycquel

    The reason I truely adore this poem is because I reminds me of the way my ex-boyfriend makes me feel! He makes me feel as though he is playing with my emotions! Yet I let him! Love is Blind! Good Work

  • 18 years ago

    by Carmen

    Ooooh. good one meggie. i loved it.
    love,
    carmen
    p.s: i'm still singing!

  • 18 years ago

    by CuteCleaver14

    I like it. Some of the rhyme was off, but other then that I liked it very much.
    ~Kayla~

  • 18 years ago

    by smile

    Wow lovely poem
    i really really enjoyed it
    amazing!!!!

    thanx for the comment on mine!

    well done...5/5

    **smile**

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Very good poem! its very unique, and flows well! there was just one problem in my opinion..

    fly away with my heart, fly away with my world,
    fly back into my life, and claim im your girl.
    ^ these lines.. all the rest of the poem rhymes except these lines.. hehe!

    anyways, excellent poem! keep up the great work! 5/5

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