Very good poem! its very unique, and flows well! there was just one problem in my opinion..

fly away with my heart, fly away with my world,
fly back into my life, and claim im your girl.
^ these lines.. all the rest of the poem rhymes except these lines.. hehe!

anyways, excellent poem! keep up the great work! 5/5

Wow lovely poem
i really really enjoyed it
amazing!!!!

thanx for the comment on mine!

well done...5/5

**smile**

I like it. Some of the rhyme was off, but other then that I liked it very much.
~Kayla~

Ooooh. good one meggie. i loved it.
love,
carmen
p.s: i'm still singing!

The reason I truely adore this poem is because I reminds me of the way my ex-boyfriend makes me feel! He makes me feel as though he is playing with my emotions! Yet I let him! Love is Blind! Good Work