by Diabolic Atrocity Apr 3, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
This is the day that everyone sees |
I like it.. the flow is a bit off in places.. but the descriptions and emotions and much better in this poem.. great job! |
This was pretty good! I liked the message and the emotion was very evident. It also flowed really well. |
This is quite good!!!!!!!!!!! |