And You Can't See

by CarissalRADIOFACEl   Apr 3, 2006


I'm screaming and I'm crying.
I'm not breathing. I'm dying.
I'm calling out for anyone to save me.
And you can't see.

I'm falling and I'm bleeding.
I'm empty and I'm needing.
I'm looking for the other part of me.
And you can't see.

I'm running and I'm getting no where.
I'm yelling and still no one cares.
I'm trying to find the better half of me.
And you can't see.

I'm alone and I'm faking.
I'm heartless and I'm breaking.
I'm pleading for you, for anyone like me.
And you can't see.

-Carissa-

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  • 18 years ago

    by jackie

    Man all the poems i have read by you make me think...i think there is great emotion in them and leads to me to think of exactely the same situatinon im in!! ughhh i can def relate

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Great Poem, i really like this one

  • 18 years ago

    by enfant du tordu chagrin

    Wow yet another great poem, with amazing emotional content. The use of "!and you can't see" at the end of each stanza makes the peom even more powerful. Your a great writer, keep it up! a brilliant poem.

    Andrew

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