Wow yet another great poem, with amazing emotional content. The use of "!and you can't see" at the end of each stanza makes the peom even more powerful. Your a great writer, keep it up! a brilliant poem.

Andrew

Great Poem, i really like this one

Man all the poems i have read by you make me think...i think there is great emotion in them and leads to me to think of exactely the same situatinon im in!! ughhh i can def relate