Comments : Who? What? When? Where? Why? How?

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Just wanted to ask, since alot of your poems are about knives and cutting.. are you a cutter? i hope not.. newayy.. very good poem! i love the idea of who, what, when, where, why, and how! very creative! 5/5
    jessy

  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Seemed a tad suicidal at some point. But the questions really built up a picture of despair. There was an undercurrent of naievety about it that I liked....made it all the more impressive for me. This sprung to my mind- 'the worst form of despair is when you dont know you're in it'

    Excellent...Brigitte...

    [lost_laureate]

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Awesome write
    5/5
    very good job
    love
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    This was pretty creative. I liked it.