by Jessica
Just wanted to ask, since alot of your poems are about knives and cutting.. are you a cutter? i hope not.. newayy.. very good poem! i love the idea of who, what, when, where, why, and how! very creative! 5/5 |
Seemed a tad suicidal at some point. But the questions really built up a picture of despair. There was an undercurrent of naievety about it that I liked....made it all the more impressive for me. This sprung to my mind- 'the worst form of despair is when you dont know you're in it' |
by amelia
Awesome write |
by Darien
This was pretty creative. I liked it. |