by Brigitte Apr 3, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
The Day hath taken it’s final bow, |
by Solnya
Once again there is nothing I can say that someone else hasn't allready said. Job very well done. |
I enjoyed this a lot it is magical that is for sure and full of imagery I can see it happening as i read your words picture passed throw me |
by PygmyPuff
This is a truly magical peice. There is seriously a metaphoric phrase in every line that adds salt to the wound, bringing out the pain...Its great, I gave it a {5/5} |
by Marlena
This is like one of my fav poems that you have written keep on writing |
I love this kind of poems. I like the story that your poem tells, and the poem is so well written. 5/5 |