Oh, this was so perfect! The flow was kinda off in the last stanza, but i loved it! Perfect!

Ya i have to agree with ~*gone~* it was really good.. i loved it.. excellent job.. keep it up..

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Lovely. i esp loved basically all of it. but im a happy ending person so the end made me sad. but over all, niice.

Hey love the poem you can really keep a poem and long and still make me love to read on love the work

This was lovely! i really liked it! :) i especially liked this bit tho! ::

“Come back sweet angel” I plead in vain
My Sorrows return, and I cry out in pain.
“Don’t leave me yet, dear sweet angel of mine,
Without you I’ll never be fine”

itz so sadd... hehe! keep up the excellent work!
jessy

Very nice poem. I really liked the language you used in this one. Also the images you created were really good and I can actually see some of these things happen as I read.

Wow! That's all I can really say. I really liked this one. I'm glad I read it. The flow was good, && Rhyming was also good too. Overall I think it was a top job! I especially loved how you worded it. The words you used were great! Keep it up 5/5

`taleee xx

Great write. The flow in the beginning was much better then towards the end, but overall, it was still good. I read this over a couple of times and I start to get a deeper meaning into the poem... maybe I'm reading too much into it, but great write overall. 5/5

Wow! 5/5 again. Just..wow..nothing else needed to be said!
~*Who Cares?*~

This poem..was so beautiful. you have such a nack for visual effects...i loved loved loved loved this poem so much! i cannot being to describe how wonderful it is!!! ur rhyming was fantastic, and it never strayed!!! GREAT! 5/5 ... ps reminds me of what i'm going thru...described in my poem "if only for one moment"

I love this kind of poems. I like the story that your poem tells, and the poem is so well written. 5/5

This is like one of my fav poems that you have written keep on writing

much love
Marlena Black

This is a truly magical peice. There is seriously a metaphoric phrase in every line that adds salt to the wound, bringing out the pain...Its great, I gave it a {5/5}

[PygmyPuff]

I enjoyed this a lot it is magical that is for sure and full of imagery I can see it happening as i read your words picture passed throw me

Once again there is nothing I can say that someone else hasn't allready said. Job very well done.