by Brigitte Apr 3, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
You are the ghost, |
by Darien
This was a cool poem. Good job on this one :) |
Spooky....I liked the use of repetition in this. I dont know if "dual" and "soul" worked so well in the rhyme but very good. |
by Jessica
Oo! i lik that one! it's kinda like you hate it and then at the end itz lik he kinda watches out for you :) hehe.. 5/5 |
Great peice, the repitition works very well in this peice. |
by Micky
Cool |