Your poem is very good Congradulations! Your a very good one to write long poems and keep them consistant in rhyming.. something i have trouble on soo GOOD JOBi loved it and its now a poem for my frinds birthday card!

Heyy! OMG....This poem is soo good! It's soo touching and....Awesome! I loved it! I can sooo relate to it...I wanna cry LoL! Awesome poem!
*Just Lisa*