Very beautiful! I loved it. You're a very talented writter. 5/5.

Taylor~

Ooooh, woweee-- This was great Lisa. To be honest, it didn't seem like an acrostic as I was reading it, cause nothing felt forced. So that's really good. Not only did you do a great job on that, but your rhyming was really nice, and it all flowed great.

Such a cute poem, too. Tehe! ..I love dancing with people! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Its unusual to have a happy poem on this website well done you have just broken the boundry i loved it it was fab keep it up xxx alex xxx

Ahhh I loved this poem! its so romantic and hot in a sensual, but not vulgar, way. awesome job! 5/5

I thought this was a great poem Lisa...Very well written and the flow was great...
~Tyanna~

Your title?
Eye catching.
It gave me shivers.
Lol.

First stanza?
Confession first, though.
I'm not usually into acrostics.
They just seem so... fake.
But this.
It's beautiful.
Specially your first stanza.

Second stanza?
I actually gigled.

Nest me by your side all night.
I love that line.

Umm...
This line just seemed a bit eccentric to me.
Enchant me as my body slips.

This part sounds like a song
Control the rhythm make it last,
Emollient my body, make it last.
It's like the backup singers in the background
Repeating what was said.
It was pretty darned cute.

Refine&Caress me baby on the dance floor.
I don't like the word... baby.
I don't know, it's just a thing with me.

All in all.
It was a beautiful write.
I was enchanted throughout the whole poem.
Although some parts needed fixing
It was still. uh-maze-zing.
Darling, you deservea 5 :]

Beautiful poem...perfect..great flow...well written acrostic..beautiful work...
i m like not all tht good in this type..n u seem to handle this one with ease
Good job!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

I loved it!!! I feel everybit of it as I read. I can't believe u came up with something like that. Great 5/5! Plz go read some of my poems and give me some feedback thanks.

MBL

Wow, I really loved this poem. The words and flow, and emotion were all amazing. You have a strong talent keep up the amazing work!

This was so beautiful! I loved the emotions you described because they took me back to a time when I was dancing with someone special. You are really talented and I look forward to reading more from you. Well done *5/5*

I Love !!!!
This was a very good acrostic, seriously..I don't see lots of acrostic poems here that would be expressed the good way.
Very well done.
But here:
"Night shall come much to fast,"
- Did you mean "too" ? you know it gives a total different meaning.

And although the wording was pretty strong, the rhyme went a bit cliche in the whole poem, the music was good but predictable at some parts.

Very well done :)
Write on

I love your rhyming! Great discriptions. The emotion in the poem was so strong it was almost tangable! 5/5.

-mandy :)