Chelsey, I don't know what to say. This is exquisite! So beautifully perfect!.

Thank you for your comments they made me smile.

hugs and love,
Mary

I agree with all these people Chelly you know how i feel about this poem and it was my absolute pleasure to help you with it :o)
I love the innocence of young love in your words...it makes me remember a precious time in my life and how simple things used to be...its beautifully depicted and voices your emotions to perfection.
Thankyou my sweet for your kind words on my latest peice, its been a while since I have written but in helping you I got inspired, you have a habit of doing that to me lil sis :o)
Love you always Risa

Good poem, i really like it. good job, keep it up

'But right now, dreaming is all I have of you.'
Man, I know that. I love this poem because you managed to take what I feel when the love is away, and put it into words. It's very well written.