by u wish Apr 3, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Spilling my soul on some page |
by Ellie
The rhyming is forced on the bottom two lines of the second stanza, unless that was done purposefully. |
Good peice, very clearly written |
by Banana
Bravo... But who holds your heart and who holds your mind? And which one matters the most? |
by vamp
Awesome work =) |
by Rob
Love it! |