You are an amazing poet...never stop writing. even if its about topics like this, these seem to be your best because they came from the heart. thats how i write...great job

Wow. this is amazing. lots of raw feeling. good job!
p.s. thnx 4 saying i hav talent, y should sadness have any affect on tht? thnx 4 the comment xx

:( :( im so sorry you have to go through this. you just have to keep trying to pull through. when you do, it'll be for the best, and you'll be alot better off. even though the topic isn't great, this is a great poem. the rhyme, and emotion in every line, and every stanza...